English proofreading for Pepper&Carrot ep. 3


The new episode of Pepper&Carrot is just around the corner and we need your help with proofreading! We’re inviting an English native speaker to help.

The subtitles here - subtitles-translation/pepper-and-carrot-ep03.msrt at master · morevnaproject-org/subtitles-translation · GitHub

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My pull request is at Update pepper-and-carrot-ep03.msrt by ArloJamesBarnes · Pull Request #86 · morevnaproject-org/subtitles-translation · GitHub – for reference, the English comic transcript: https://framagit.org/peppercarrot/webcomics/-/raw/master/ep03_The-secret-ingredients/lang/en/ep03_en_transcript.md

Copied below for the convenience of those not used to Git diffs:

[eng] Let me guess business is booming?

[eng] I suppose your business must be just booming? I imagine business is booming?

[eng] …plus egg shells from the Phoenix valley of the volcanos…

[eng] …plus egg shells from a phoenix in the Valley of the Volcanos… …plus phoenix egg shells in the Valley of the Volcanos…

edit: thanks, @Stas, my shorter suggestions are the ones I made in the pull request.

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We can’t make phrases longer because of lipsync, please, pay attention to that:)


The post is updated.

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